Chapter 3 Pages 42-47

Six new pages this week, but it will take you only 10 seconds to read them. Continue from last week here.

Katlyn and Eden are in trouble; outnumbered, outmatched and backed into a corner with only the white hot heat of Katlyn’s rage to save them. Will it be enough?

Alright, I’m going to try something different for the vote incentive this week. I’ve tried sketches but they seem a bit blah. I’ve put up whole pencilled pages but I think they give away too much. I’ve done thumb nailed and cleaned up pencil versions and I’m sure you prefer the cleaned up ones.

This week I’m shifting to a single panel from the next update, cleaned up pencils. The idea is the image will act as a more obscure teaser, something cool, but possibly deliberately misleading.

I’ve had no feedback on the vote incentive images, except the first one that really pissed people off :) Let me know which style you like best, or even if there is a different sort of incentive you’d like to see. (Evil Diva does an ‘overdub’ they call slly words where they exchange the dialogue on a page for something more humerous, for instance.)

Anyway, hope you like this update. I personally love getting to the action parts, and luckily there’s more to come.

Till next week, Tobles out!